Showing posts with label Comments. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Comments. Show all posts

Wednesday, 31 March 2010

Monkey Time! Survey Time!


If you would be so kind as to complete the entirety of my survey pilot which has been created for PROFESSIONAL DANCERS on the subject of learning choreography. Thank you very much your time and effort is appreciated especially as lots of us are creating them right now!


Any extra feedback on the survey would also be appreciated, as it no doubt will have flaws. It took three sittings to get it to this stage, as I had to return to what I actually wanted to find out and delete the pointless questions I had entered.

Anyway, thank you x


Saturday, 2 January 2010

A Message For Donna

Hi Donna
hope you're well, i tried last night to post a comment on your blog but it woudn't let me
i've had a look at your drafts and they are looking very good.
I like your image for marketing, I think this works well because it gives something to the audience.
I know it's possibly too late for feedback, but you could use these comments for task E. Your marketing is direct and to the point giving information needed. have you thought about the audience you would be marketing this particular film to, and how that might change the vocabulary choices?
I like how you've made your descriptive piece into a story commentary, maybe you could include descriptions of other senses? This piece starts off really well.

Your academic covers a range of sources and is very detailed and interesting, but perhaps you could summarise the outcome of the piece ina concluding statement at the end, but otherwise love it!
Hope panto is going well, mine's just finished, hopefully see you soon xxx